Catch a Falling Star

Hey there! This is a good piece- I like the quality of the art, and her body is wonderfully made. She has very good proportion and you did very good with her hands- something that other artists, including myself, have great difficulty with.

A couple things I noticed that you can definitely work on if you want to- From the piece, you seem to want her eyes and the star to stand out. If that is what you want, then you did very good- just work on the eyebrows a little- make them thinner, less defined. This looks to be a very fun, happy piece, but with the eyes in this style it looks rather melancholy- sad, even. Another little thing is the brightness of her eyes in contrast to the star. If you want the star to be the main subject, I'd make her eyes a little less dramatically colored and brighten the star a little bit more. The eyes are the most vibrant part of the piece, and it's easy to overlook the star- my eyes go straight to the girl's eyes. Like I said, if this wasn't your vision, you can disregard this part of my critique.

But overall this is very good- the background is simply beautiful, your ability with anatomy is great and your style is just breathtaking. Wonderful job!